{"id":1004,"date":"2021-06-21T15:48:42","date_gmt":"2021-06-21T15:48:42","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/?p=1004"},"modified":"2021-06-21T19:31:48","modified_gmt":"2021-06-21T19:31:48","slug":"analysis-not-emotion-reflections-on-reflection","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/2021\/06\/21\/analysis-not-emotion-reflections-on-reflection\/","title":{"rendered":"Analysis, Not Emotion: Reflections on Reflection"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"has-text-align-right has-white-color has-text-color has-background\" style=\"background-color:#0071a1\">by Matt Forsythe<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center has-black-color has-text-color\"><strong><em>\u201cBut I don\u2019t care how my students feel about an assignment.\u201d\u00a0 <\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-drop-cap has-black-color has-text-color\">Last year, when our <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/www.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/activities-gatherings\/working-groups.html\" target=\"_blank\">signature working group<\/a> <\/span>presented on the topic of reflection at an rFLA meeting, we heard this objection from several colleagues in breakout groups.\u00a0 They wanted students to <em>analyze<\/em> the topic under consideration, whether it be a political theory, a scientific experiment, or a classic novel.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">Fortunately, as we explained, those objectives are no different than our goals when prompting students to reflect on an assignment or course.&nbsp; <strong>We are asking them to describe what they did, to explain the decisions they made and the reasons behind them, and to analyze the strengths and shortcomings of their approach.&nbsp; We want them to articulate the lessons they\u2019ve learned and to envision how they might use them on future assignments, in other courses, and within their professional careers.&nbsp; In the process, they reinforce the value of the skills they\u2019ve developed and increase the likelihood that they\u2019ll return to them in the future, improving that oft-discussed and ever-elusive question of \u201ctransfer.\u201d<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">Of course, we don\u2019t cover all of those goals in a single reflection assignment.&nbsp; Instead, we focus on a specific question or series of questions.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong><em>\u201cWhat Have I Done? . . . and Why?\u201d<\/em><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">In writing courses, when students submit an essay or story, I often ask them to provide a brief note after the Honor Code that explains the primary focus of the submission.&nbsp; The exercise is simple but has practical applications, building skills that can be applied in scenarios as varied as cocktail hours, scientific abstracts, and job interviews.&nbsp; It can also lead to productive conversations about emphasis and structure, especially if there\u2019s a disconnect between their stated purpose and the draft\u2019s actual focus.&nbsp; It\u2019s an effective strategy during peer reviews and conferences, because this short explanation sometimes has a stronger claim than their current thesis.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\"><figure class=\"alignright size-large is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/airport-man-sitting-on-chair-near-glass-window-reflection-reflection-image-1024x683.jpeg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-1011\" width=\"431\" height=\"287\" srcset=\"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/airport-man-sitting-on-chair-near-glass-window-reflection-reflection-image-1024x683.jpeg 1024w, https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/airport-man-sitting-on-chair-near-glass-window-reflection-reflection-image-300x200.jpeg 300w, https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/airport-man-sitting-on-chair-near-glass-window-reflection-reflection-image-768x512.jpeg 768w, https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/airport-man-sitting-on-chair-near-glass-window-reflection-reflection-image-675x450.jpeg 675w, https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/airport-man-sitting-on-chair-near-glass-window-reflection-reflection-image-350x233.jpeg 350w, https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/airport-man-sitting-on-chair-near-glass-window-reflection-reflection-image.jpeg 1200w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 431px) 100vw, 431px\" \/><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\"><strong>Asking students to move beyond \u201cWhat\u201d and into \u201cWhy\u201d takes this post-assignment reflection into more sophisticated territory.&nbsp;<\/strong> For example, Victoria Brown has writers submit a \u201cjustification\u201d essay along with their revisions in fiction and creative nonfiction workshops, explaining the rationale for changes they made and offering their insights about the piece.&nbsp; Such a project can also take the form of annotations within the document or an assignment wrapper, similar to the projects that many rFLA instructors have students include with their assessment artifacts.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">In my \u201cWriting Books for (&amp; with) Children\u201d course, I push this \u201cWhy\u201d essay even further, requiring students to identify specific lessons from the course within their analysis of the book they created with their partner at the Child Development Center.&nbsp; On one level, their reflective essay is an account of their work with a younger partner, including challenges they faced and how they overcame them\u2014practicing the type of narrative that will serve them well in job applications and self-evaluations, such as the statements we write during the P&amp;T process.&nbsp; However, it also prompts them to explain how their story illustrates the principles of writing picture books from our course texts and to compare their creation to books that we\u2019ve read.&nbsp; Thus the reflection is both an account of the process and a demonstration of the knowledge they\u2019ve gained in the course as a whole\u2014what they\u2019ve learned and how they\u2019ve applied it.&nbsp; Requiring them to articulate the skills they\u2019ve practiced makes the learning explicit.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong><em>\u201cHow Did I Do It? . . . How Can I Do It Again?\u201d<\/em><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\"><strong>Another form of productive reflection asks the students to focus on their process, rather than the product.<\/strong>&nbsp; The goal of this approach is helping students analyze <em>how<\/em> they produced an essay, drawing their attention to strategies and techniques they can utilize on future projects.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">For example, Lucy Littler has an excellent exercise that her English 140 students complete on the day they submit their first essay.&nbsp; As she notes, it prompts them to surface, critique, and transfer a range of concepts, including how they learned\u2014or didn\u2019t learn\u2014content, how they applied content and methods to solve a problem, and how they completed a task.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-left has-black-color has-text-color has-background\" style=\"background-color:#e7ecf1\"><em>* Most of this section is taken directly from Lucy Littler\u2019s presentation slides about this exercise for our group\u2019s presentation to the rFLA Program, and she should be considered its co-author.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">What does Lucy hope that her students learn as they complete their first essay?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"has-black-color has-text-color wp-block-list\"><li>Writing is a process.<\/li><li>Writing about something helps you think\/learn about it.<\/li><li>Writers can make choices.<\/li><li>What we\u2019re doing in this class can be applied in other classes.<\/li><\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">As the session begins, the entire class reflects on these ideas, writing and talking collaboratively about their experiences with Paper #1.&nbsp; They then complete the following prompts.&nbsp; Note their connections to each of the learning goals that Lucy has identified.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-9d6595d7 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:1.71%\">\n<div style=\"height:100px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:98.29%\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-group has-white-background-color has-text-color has-background\" style=\"color:#888c8f\"><div class=\"wp-block-group__inner-container is-layout-flow wp-block-group-is-layout-flow\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-9d6595d7 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:100%\"><\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-color\" style=\"color:#969191;font-size:21px\"><strong>Paper 1 Writing Reflection Prompts<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-color\" style=\"color:#969191\"><strong>1.<\/strong> In\u00a0<em>Writing with Power<\/em>, Peter Elbow argues that engaging in the iterative practice of writing\/revision helps an idea \u201cgrow.\u201d When you think about where you started (pre-draft brainstorming and draft 1) and where you ended up (final draft), how did your ideas <em>grow<\/em>? How did\u00a0<em>engaging in the act of writing<\/em>\u00a0enable this growth?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-color\" style=\"color:#969191\"><em>Learning Goals:<\/em> <em>Writing about something helps you think\/learn about it, Writing is a process.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-color\" style=\"color:#969191\"><strong>2. <\/strong> Learning to write well means developing a writing process you can count on to help you produce your best work. When you look back over your experiences writing paper 1, what elements\/steps in your process were most helpful and why? What will you definitely do again? What&#8217;s one thing you did that you would NOT do again?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-color\" style=\"color:#969191\"><em>Learning Goals:<\/em> <em>Writing is a process, Writers can make choices, What we\u2019re doing in this class can be applied in others.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-color\" style=\"color:#969191\"><strong>3. <\/strong>Learning to write well means understanding that different situations require different kinds of writing. For example, you will need to produce different kinds of writing in your biology class than in your creative writing class. What&#8217;s one lesson you\u2019ve learned about writing and\/or rhetorical analysis that you plan to use in another course you\u2019re currently taking?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-color\" style=\"color:#969191\"><em>Learning Goals:<\/em>  <em>What we\u2019re doing in this class can be applied in others, Writers can make choices.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">Lucy emphasizes that teachers who include a reflection assignment should be transparent about their goals and provide a clear structure.&nbsp; <strong>First, the instructor should have a conversation about <em>why<\/em> they\u2019re asking students to reflect.&nbsp; Then, they should provide a prompt that connects the students\u2019 reflections to the learning goals, scaffolding the assignment with brainstorming and discussion before moving to a written\u2014possibly graded\u2014reflection.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong><em>\u201cWhat Have I Learned? . . . How Can I Apply This?\u201d<\/em><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">One of my favorite reflection assignments is in &#8220;Editing Essentials,&#8221; a course that teaches principles of grammar and style to our English majors and Writing minors.&nbsp; The project requires them to <strong>identify specific ways that they\u2019ve applied the lessons from our course to their writing assignments in other classes throughout the semester.<\/strong>&nbsp; It emphasizes the immediate application of the course material.&nbsp; Although they won\u2019t submit it until the end of the term, I begin discussing this project on the first day of class.&nbsp; That allows them to begin thinking about the assignment in advance, but it has several additional benefits: it encourages students to approach each new topic as something that can be applied to other classes; it prompts them to make these connections throughout the semester, rather than at the conclusion of the term; and it frames the entire semester through a practical lens.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">A variation on this assignment focuses on a specific application.&nbsp; For example, another project in the course asks students to find an essay they submitted in a previous semester, annotating the changes that they <em>would<\/em> have made, had they possessed the knowledge they\u2019ve now obtained in Editing Essentials.&nbsp; Anne Zimmermann also assigns a reflection on a specific assignment, prompting students to discuss the lessons about memoir that they\u2019ve learned from an essay about music, as well as the manner in which it fosters their understanding of generational identity.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">For students who are suspicious about the application of a course such as English 140, Lucy has recruited an army of witnesses: testimonies from colleagues across the disciplines, discussing the role that writing plays in their field, and testimonies from friends in the workforce, who explain the many ways that they write analytically on a daily basis.&nbsp; Such evidence provides <strong>a backdrop for reflective writing in which students envision the ways that they\u2019ll apply the course in the future.<\/strong>&nbsp; This exercise not only reinforces the practical application of first-year composition, but it primes the students to anticipate the skills transfer to future courses.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">I provide a similar, implicit emphasis in English 140 when I describe my visits to Biology 440 courses to teach students in the Senior Seminar about strategies for approaching their research thesis project, a 22-25 page essay that incorporates 50+ academic sources.&nbsp; On one hand, this provides a wake-up call to my first-year students who are exploring majors in the sciences, especially when I inform them that this Biology paper is longer than any of the essays that our English majors complete in their advanced courses.&nbsp; But it also builds my ethos as a teacher, emphasizing that the skills in our course are valued in other disciplines as well.&nbsp; A similar process happens when I use essays by their other professors as examples of academic research, demonstrating the range of writing that occurs at Rollins in every field.&nbsp; Meanwhile, the opposite approach works with my creative writing students, who occasionally resist the analytical writing I assign; they are chagrined to learn that the daily life of a professor contains far more technical writing than imaginative work, whether I\u2019m answering emails, writing assessment reports, or completing a blog post about a signature working group.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\"><strong>A final, practical way that you can prompt students to reflect on their learning is also one of the most simple: ask them to articulate the most important lessons from the semester.<\/strong>&nbsp; For example, my English 140 students complete this exercise as a list of five short paragraphs, each identifying a concept that we\u2019ve discussed and why they see it as important.&nbsp; On one hand, this assignment gives me a fascinating glimpse of the class from my students\u2019 perspective.&nbsp; It also leaves them with concrete evidence of their takeaways from the semester: rather than simply <em>feeling<\/em> that they learned something, the reflection prompts them to analyze and articulate <em>what<\/em> they\u2019ve actually learned.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">And here\u2019s a tip, if you\u2019re thinking about incorporating this assignment: I conduct a discussion of this prompt and even some in-class brainstorming about it in sessions immediately prior to the week that CIEs open.&nbsp; We all know a potential shortcoming of the course evaluation instrument: it sometimes captures how a student <em>feels<\/em> about a course, rather than the actual learning that occurred.&nbsp; By asking my students to reflect on the lessons from our semester, I increase the odds that they\u2019ll mention them when they\u2019re completing their CIEs.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\">I haven\u2019t collected any empirical data about the effect.&nbsp; However, I can still remember a blistering comment from early in my teaching career\u2014\u201cI don&#8217;t feel like I&#8217;ve learned anything from what was taught in this course\u201d\u2014an anomaly within that section, but the type of critical outlier that sticks in our minds, long after we\u2019ve forgotten the many positive reviews. &nbsp;At the time, I knew that couldn\u2019t possibly be the case.&nbsp; These days, when I\u2019ve asked students to reflect on the lessons from our semester together, I\u2019m confident that it\u2019s not.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-black-color has-text-color\"><em><strong>This Signature Working Group through the Endeavor Center consisted of Victoria Brown, Jim Driggers, Matthew Forsythe, Lucy Littler, and Anne Zimmermann.<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>by Matt Forsythe \u201cBut I don\u2019t care how my students feel about an assignment.\u201d\u00a0 Last year, when our signature working<br \/><a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/2021\/06\/21\/analysis-not-emotion-reflections-on-reflection\/\">Read More<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":1011,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[2,4],"tags":[59],"class_list":["post-1004","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-resource","category-story","tag-reflection"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1004","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1004"}],"version-history":[{"count":26,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1004\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1045,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1004\/revisions\/1045"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/1011"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1004"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1004"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.rollins.edu\/endeavor\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1004"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}